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by Scaredy Ghost

The Lauren Vance files 1: The Monster'sblueprint

Chapter 1

The Case of Marcus Brody

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"If a person's disappearance is merely a statistic in a file, those left behind will live in suspicion. But if that disappearance is a master plan, those left behind will drown in a nightmare."

The office of the Criminal Investigation Division at the Suffolk County Police Department in Boston was perpetually submerged in a thick atmosphere of lukewarm, stale drip coffee and the acrid smell of thermal print paper. Autumn had swept over the Northeastern United States, bringing relentless, dragging rain. Outside the fogged windowpanes, crimson maple leaves drifted onto shattered brick sidewalks, soaked and crushed beneath the tires of patrolling SUVs.

Lauren Vance leaned back in her office chair, both hands wrapped around a chipped porcelain mug containing a dark liquid that had formed a thin skin over its surface. Turning thirty-eight this year, Lauren possessed sharp ash-gray eyes and a defined, angular jawline. Her years of dedicated service to the department had not eroded her sharpness; they had merely left fine lines at the corners of her eyes whenever she narrowed them to observe a crime scene. A few un-dried raindrops still clung to the shoulders of her beige woolen coat.

Upon her peeling veneer desk sat a towering stack of case files. Lauren sighed, running a hand through a wave of brown hair that fell across her forehead, and pulled the newest folder toward herself.

The file bore the designation #309-B, marked with a yellow tag: Missing Person – Marcus Brody.

Lauren opened the first page. A four-by-six passport photo appeared. The man in the picture was twenty-eight years old, with a handsome square jawline, a high nose bridge, neatly groomed hair, and a slight, somewhat hesitant smile.

"Marcus Brody. Twenty-eight years old. Data analyst at Vanguard Financial, Downtown Boston branch. Missing for exactly six months," Lauren muttered, her index finger rhythmically tapping the edge of the desk.

A colleague passing by set his walkie-talkie down on the adjacent desk and lit a cigarette. "Still on the Brody case, Lauren? That report was filed six months ago. His family is all the way out in Ohio, and the big bosses at Vanguard hired his replacement four months back. Nobody cares anymore."

Lauren didn't look up, her eyes remaining fixed on the dry lines of black ink. "A twenty-eight-year-old male, stable job making eighty thousand dollars a year, no personal debt, no criminal record, no signs of depression. Six months ago, on a clear Friday evening, March 15, he walked out of his office building at seven-fifteen PM, entered the Park Street subway station... and vanished like a wisp of smoke."

"Maybe he got tired of life and caught a Greyhound bus to Mexico to start fresh?" The colleague shrugged, exhaling a plume of gray smoke.

"Zero credit card transactions after eight PM that night," Lauren replied coldly, her finger sliding across Marcus's bank statements. "ATM cards, credit cards, online savings accounts... all completely frozen. His Social Security number hasn't been flagged in any state across the US either. His iPhone 13 lost signal entirely at cell tower four, right near the Boston Common area."

Lauren turned to the next page. The search report from his residence six months ago stated clearly: Marcus Brody's rented apartment in the South End was in pristine condition. Clothes hung neatly in the closet, food in the refrigerator had long expired, his MacBook Pro was still plugged into the charger on his desk, and his Honda Civic was parked untouched in the basement garage.

A person planning to disappear forever would never leave behind all their identification, wallet, and daily vehicle. He didn't run away. He was evaporated. Or erased.

Lauren tilted her head, her hawk-like gaze fixed on the map of the South End appended to the back of the file. Suddenly, her eyes froze at the section listing the victim's previous address.

It was a line of typed text: Previous Permanent Address: 412 Beacon Street, Back Bay, Boston.

What was strange was that someone had taken a thick red marker and crossed out this address with a heavy, aggressive line—so hard it had nearly torn the thin paper. Right next to that brutal red slash was a tiny, meticulously handwritten note in black ink: Moved two years ago – Irrelevant.

Lauren narrowed her eyes. She traced her finger over the red ink that had dried months ago. This violent, hasty slash stood in sharp contrast to the neat, cautious nature of standard police detective reports. Who crossed it out? Why was a victim's old address crossed out so aggressively, as if trying to wipe away all trace of it?

Lauren picked up a pencil, flipping the page beneath the flickering overhead neon light. Despite the thick red ink, under the tilt of the light, the indentation of the typed letters beneath remained faintly visible.

"412 Beacon Street..." Lauren whispered. That was a historic red-brick building near the Charles River, where rent was exorbitantly high. Why would an average-earning office worker like Marcus Brody have lived there before moving to a modest apartment in the South End?

The ringing of her desk phone severed her train of thought. Lauren glanced at the screen. The caller ID read: Chloe.

The sharp, cold demeanor on the detective's face vanished instantly, replaced by a soft, affectionate expression. Lauren picked up the receiver and lowered her voice: "I'm here, sweetie."

"Mom? You forgot what time it is again, didn't you?" A clear, vibrant young voice resonated through the speaker, accompanied by the rhythmic tapping of a wooden spoon against a pot.

Lauren startled, looking up at the wall clock in the office. The short hand had passed six. Autumn nights in Boston fell fast, and outside the window, the sky had turned pitch-black without her noticing.

"Oh, Lord, Chloe. I'm so sorry," Lauren stood up hastily, gathering the Marcus Brody file and shoving it into her leather briefcase. "I'm packing up now. I'll be home in fifteen minutes. Don't go eating junk food!"

"Don't worry, I'm making pumpkin soup. But if you're not home in fifteen minutes, I'm eating your share of the steak!" Chloe giggled before hanging up.

Lauren closed her briefcase, but the image of the thick red marker line crossing out 412 Beacon Street lingered in her mind. Grabbing her bag, she threw on her gray woolen coat and hurried out of the police station.

Lauren and her daughter's two-story Victorian wooden house sat in a quiet alleyway in Jamaica Plain, sheltered by rows of maple trees shedding their autumn leaves. Warm yellow light spilled from the kitchen window, creating a scene in stark contrast to the dreary coldness of the homicide cases Lauren faced daily.

When Lauren unlocked the front door and stepped inside, the rich aroma of garlic butter steak and hot pumpkin soup flooded her senses.

"I'm home!" Lauren hung her rain-dampened coat on a wooden hook, unholstered her Glock 19 from her hip, and carefully locked it inside the digital safe built into the living room wall closet—an unalterable habit maintained for eighteen years to ensure her daughter's safety.

Chloe emerged from the kitchen holding a dish towel. Lauren's eighteen-year-old daughter possessed voluminous golden hair and clear, peach-blue eyes. Chloe carried the pure, innocent brightness of a young woman who had just crossed into adulthood, fresh from orientation week at Boston University and due to start classes on Monday.

"Overtime again," Chloe teased, coming over to wrap her arms around her mother's neck, inhaling the lingering scent of rain in Lauren's hair. "If the Homicide Division didn't have Lauren Vance, it would definitely collapse."

Lauren smiled, gently patting her daughter's back as a deep, lingering sense of guilt welled in her chest. For eighteen years, ever since her husband—a Marine officer—was killed in action in the Middle East, Lauren had raised Chloe alone. A demanding police career filled with sudden night shifts and bloody crime scenes had stolen too much of her time with her child. Often, looking at how tall and mature Chloe had grown, Lauren would realize with a start just how many milestones she had missed.

"I'm sorry, Chloe. An old case file needed reviewing today," Lauren took her daughter's hand and walked to the dining table. "Classes start Monday. I promise I'll take two days off starting tomorrow to help you shop for your textbooks and supplies."

"You said it! I'm recording this!" Chloe laughed brightly, hastily ladling a bowl of pumpkin soup and setting it before her mother.

Mother and daughter sat across from each other under the soft yellow glow of the pendant light. The pitter-patter of rain on the tin roof outside made the interior feel all the warmer. Watching her daughter eat heartily, the exhaustion from a long day spent facing the dark corners of crime seemed to evaporate completely.

"So, how was orientation week at university? Anything interesting?" Lauren asked casually while cutting a piece of steak.

Chloe's hand holding her spoon paused briefly. A faint blush crept across the young girl's pale cheeks. Chloe lowered her head, swirling the spoon through the soup in her bowl, her voice suddenly becoming hesitant, filled with the shy bashfulness of youth.

"It was... fine, I guess," Chloe stammered, not daring to meet her mother's eyes. "It's just... I met a senior guy."

Lauren raised an eyebrow, the instincts of both a mother and a detective activating instantly. She set her knife and fork down, tilting her head toward her daughter with a knowing smile. "Oh? A senior? Who is this guy that's got my Chloe so hesitant?"

Chloe looked up, her eyes sparkling with excitement before slumping slightly into an exaggerated sigh. "His name is Julian... Julian Frost. He's an upperclassman in Criminal Psychology. He's... really strange, Mom."

"Strange how?" Lauren asked calmly, gently prompting her.

"He's really handsome, quiet, and insanely smart," Chloe rested her chin on her hands, her gaze drifting out the window as if picturing someone's face. "But he always keeps a certain distance from everyone. Sometimes he's so attentive—he helped me carry a back-breaking stack of books at the library and even bought me an almond latte... But then the very next day, when I said hi to him in the hallway, he just gave a cold nod and walked right past like we were complete strangers."

Chloe pouted, her tone bearing the dramatic agony of a young girl falling in love for the first time. "I just can't figure out what he's thinking, Mom. It feels like he's right there in front of me, but at the same time, miles away. I don't know... if he actually has feelings for me, or if I'm just fooling myself."

Lauren watched her daughter's innocent, conflicted expression and couldn't help but smile. She remembered herself at eighteen, driven crazy by the ambiguous gestures of young men.

"Sweetheart," Lauren reached across the table, taking Chloe's small hand, her eyes filled with the warmth and life experience of a thirty-eight-year-old woman. "Guys at that age are sometimes very clumsy at expressing their emotions, or maybe they carry their own burdens they aren't ready to share yet. But youth is meant for experiencing things. If you truly feel your heart flutter for him, don't hesitate to take a step forward."

Chloe looked up, her eyes brightening. "Really? I should be the one to make a move?"

"Of course," Lauren smiled, gently patting her daughter's head. "Don't let yourself regret the things you weren't brave enough to do. Just be yourself, step up, and find your answer. If he likes you, he'll accept it. And if he doesn't, Lauren Vance's daughter is strong enough to move on, right?"

Chloe burst into a happy laugh, nodding eagerly. "Yes! Taking Captain Vance's advice, I've decided... I'm going to win over Julian Frost!"

Chloe's clear laughter resonated throughout the small kitchen. Lauren looked at her daughter affectionately, a strange warmth surging in her heart. She had no idea that her genuine, motherly advice tonight would inadvertently push her innocent daughter into the gears of a terrifying destiny.

Night had fallen deep. The wooden house settled into quiet solitude. Chloe had retired to her bedroom early after a long day preparing for the new academic year.

Downstairs, in the small home office flooded with the pale yellow light of a desk lamp, Lauren Vance remained seated. She had changed out of her police uniform into a dark gray turtleneck sweater.

On the wooden desk, the Marcus Brody case file lay open once more.

Lauren put on her reading glasses, unpinned the papers one by one, and reviewed every investigation report from six months ago. Her seasoned detective instincts refused to let go of the anomalies.

She picked up Marcus Brody's photo. A twenty-eight-year-old male office worker, vanished without a trace.

Lauren turned back to his personal profile. Her finger stopped at the address crossed out in red marker: 412 Beacon Street, Back Bay, Boston.

Why would information regarding a past residence be intentionally crossed out with such aggressive strokes? Lauren pulled her personal laptop closer, quickly typing into the Suffolk County Police Department's internal database system to which she had access.

She typed the address: 412 Beacon Street, Back Bay.

The screen flickered for a few seconds before displaying the ownership history of the historic red-brick building.

The building belonged to a private real estate firm. But under the tenant history from two years ago, Marcus Brody's name appeared for Apartment 3B.

At the very bottom of the printout, one more line: Lower level – 2 storage vaults, long-term lease. The page cut off before the names. Lauren didn't scroll for them. She had a missing man to find, not a basement inventory to read.

What was most noteworthy was that Marcus Brody had lived in Apartment 3B for three years, until he abruptly terminated his lease two years ago and moved to the modest apartment in the South End.

Lauren narrowed her eyes. Two years ago... That was a year and a half before Marcus Brody vanished.

She scrolled the mouse down to the investigation notes left by the officer in charge of the missing person case six months ago. The original officer assigned was Detective Miller—a veteran cop who had retired the previous month.

In Miller's Word document log, there was a brief bullet point:

  • Checked 412 Beacon St per routine protocol. Apartment 3B currently rented by another tenant. No leads related to victim. Disregarding this lead.

Lauren leaned back in her chair, arms crossed over her chest. The red marker line on the paper file had been drawn by Detective Miller. But why had he crossed it out so aggressively? Was it the carelessness of a retiring cop eager to close a file, or was there an unseen force pushing to erase the very existence of Apartment 3B at 412 Beacon Street from this case?

Outside, a strong gust of wind slammed against the wooden window frame, producing a long, creaking sound like a sigh from the dark.

Lauren picked up Marcus Brody's photo once more. The hesitant smile of the twenty-eight-year-old man in the picture seemed to hide a dark, unencoded secret.

A vague yet razor-sharp intuition born of years as a homicide detective told Lauren: Marcus Brody's disappearance six months ago was no ordinary missing person case.

And the historic apartment at 412 Beacon Street was where the first dark links in the chain had begun to bloom.

Lauren closed the folder, switched off the desk lamp, and submerged herself in the quiet dark of the night. She did not know that in another corner of Boston, inside a dingy apartment reeking of a strange, putrid stench, the wheels of crime had already begun to turn—and its next target was none other than the eighteen-year-old daughter she loved more than her own life.

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