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Chapter 2

THE RECEIPT

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CHAPTER 2: THE RECEIPT

Night fell over Cleveland wrapped in the thick, clammy air of early autumn.

The fading evening light yielded to a deep darkness that swallowed the high-rises beyond the glass windows. The high-rise apartment Win shared with Keaton was bathed in the murky yellow glow of the chandelier hanging in the center of the living room. On the cold gray marble dining table, two containers of Italian takeout had long gone stone-cold. A film of grease from the Bolognese had congealed into a thin layer, reflecting the harsh, unforgiving light.

Keaton Pruitt sat across from her, holding a silver fork, though he hadn't touched a single bite.

This scene should have belonged to a peaceful evening between a couple about to walk down the aisle. They had planned to eat dinner together, go over the guest list, and debate which wine to serve for their lakeside reception. But right now, the air between them was thick with a silence so taut it felt like a piano wire pulled to its limit, waiting for the slightest touch to snap.

Win sat with her back straight, her gaze fixed on the skim of tomato sauce inside the paper box. Her voice sounded flat, without a single ripple, as if she were delivering a Q4 financial report to the board of directors:

"The biopsy came back positive. Stage IV colorectal cancer, metastasized to the liver. Dr. Voigt said aggressive chemo might buy eight to twelve months. Without it, we're measuring time in months."

The moment her final words landed on the floor, the space plunged into a suffocating, dead silence.

Keaton didn't cry out. He didn't bolt upright in shock, nor did he rush to wrap her in his arms the way people imagined a loyal fiancé would.

The handsome, polished face of the thirty-two-year-old man hardened into stone. His slate-blue eyes widened, staring blankly at Win’s delicate yet pale face. The silence stretched on, second after second, minute after minute. Win silently counted in her head, her heartbeat slow and icy.

Ten seconds. Seventy seconds. Two minutes passed.

When Keaton finally broke his silence, the first words that slipped from his neatly sculpted, thin lips weren't asking if she was in pain, nor were they a promise to stand by her through the storm.

"The deposit for the lakeside venue..." Keaton blinked, his voice halting, scratching like an old broken record. "That eight thousand dollars... do you think they'll let us get it back?"

Win lifted her head slightly, her eyes meeting his.

In the eyes of the man who had once sworn to spend forever with her beneath an arch of fresh flowers, she saw no sorrow, no agony—only a wave of panicked calculation. It was the look of a trader who had just realized the commodity he’d poured capital into had suddenly crashed in market value.

The corners of Win’s lips curled into a smile as thin as a razor blade.

"Keaton, are you worrying about the wedding deposit?"

Keaton’s brows furrowed tightly. He set the silver fork down on the table, creating a sharp, metallic clatter against the stone. He reached out as if to grasp her hand, but pulled back halfway, lacing his fingers together in his lap instead.

"Win, you have to understand me. We have to be realistic." Keaton breathed heavily, his tone dressing up sheer cruelty as the rational logic of an adult. "I can't throw money into something when I already know how it ends."

He swallowed hard, his eyes darting frantically around the apartment.

"That sixty or eighty thousand dollars for chemo... it’s our entire savings. If we pour all of it in just to buy a few extra months in a hospital bed, and then you still... still pass away, what am I left with? I have a future, Win. I have a career, and I have to keep living. I can’t be left with nothing at thirty-two."

I can't throw money into something when I already know how it ends.

Those words struck Win’s chest like a splash of concentrated acid. It scorched every last flicker of hope lingering in her heart, turning four years of love into a pile of foul-smelling ash.

Win looked at him. Her expression was so detached it sent a chill down her own spine.

No tears. No indignation. She observed Keaton’s entire demeanor with an eerie composure, driven by the cold, precise instincts of a Hartwell Mutual adjuster. In her eyes right now, Keaton was no longer the gentle fiancé who had kissed her in the rain. He was merely a party to a claims agreement that had just been terminated due to unmanageable risk exposure.

"You're right." Win gave a faint nod, her voice as clear as first snow. "Very realistic. Very reasonable."

Keaton stared at her, seemingly unsettled by her unnerving calmness. He stood up, taking a step back.

"I... I think I should stay at a friend’s place tonight. So we can both clear our heads."

He turned and walked into the bedroom. Win remained seated in her leather chair at the dining table, quietly listening to the sounds echoing from inside.

The raspy pull of a suitcase zipper. The clatter of clothes hangers knocking together. The harsh opening and closing of closet doors.

The entire packing process took exactly forty minutes.

Forty minutes for a man to erase every trace of a four-year relationship from a home. He gathered his expensive clothes, leather shoes, watches, and stacks of personal financial documents. He didn't even forget to detach the expensive Breville coffee maker from the kitchen counter—the one they had chipped in together to buy last Christmas.

When Keaton rolled his suitcase into the living room, the coffee maker sat neatly in a carefully wrapped paper bag under his arm.

He stood in front of Win, his face softening slightly with a flash of guilt, yet his boots were already pointed straight toward the front door.

"The joint account... $212,600. I'll transfer half back to you tomorrow morning. What you do with your share is up to you. The gray car is in your name, so keep it. As for this apartment... I’ve already paid this month's rent."

"Keaton," Win called out.

He froze, without turning his head. "What is it?"

"Take those two containers of Bolognese with you." Win glanced toward the dining table. "I don't like cold food."

Keaton bit his lip, uttering not another word. He stepped over, grabbed the two cold paper boxes covered in congealed grease, and dragged his suitcase out the door.

The door slammed shut with a heavy bang. The slight vibration rattled the wooden door before returning the room to a desolate, bone-chilling silence.

Midnight.

The living room lay in ruins, looking like a freshly ransacked site. The sofa cushions were disheveled, and empty spaces on the bookshelves bore faint outlines of dust where Keaton’s decor items used to sit. Half the room was empty, echoing Win’s own body—half of which was currently being devoured by a ruthless tumor.

Win sat cross-legged on the cold hardwood floor, her back pressed against the sofa, her arms wrapped around her knees. She stared blankly into the empty space before her, neither sobbing nor trembling. She was submerged in absolute numbness, feeling every slow beat of her heart like the ticking of a death clock.

The sharp ring of the doorbell shattered the graveyard quiet.

Immediately after came the metallic clatter of a spare key turning in the lock. The door burst open, and Josie—Win’s only close friend since college—rushed into the apartment like a wild gust of wind.

Josie had just finished her night shift at the newspaper, still wearing a trench coat damp with cold mist. She took in the half-empty living room, saw Win sitting motionless on the floor like a plaster statue, and her eyes landed on the medical diagnosis sheet lying abandoned on the table.

"Win!"

Josie hurled her purse to the floor and dropped to her knees beside Win. Her hands trembled as she snatched up the diagnosis paper, her eyes skimming the harsh black print: Stage IV... Liver metastasis...

"No... This can't be real... What kind of bullshit is this, Win?!"

Josie burst into tears, mascara smudging across her cheeks. She threw her arms around Win, clinging to her friend's thin shoulders as sobs wracked her body. The mournful, agonizing crying echoed through the vacant living room. Josie wept for Win’s cruel fate, wept for the despicable betrayal of the lover who had just packed up and left, and wept for a beautiful thirty-year-old life thrown into the ashes.

Win sat still in Josie’s warm embrace.

She felt the heat of Josie’s tears soaking through her silk shirt, felt her friend’s erratic heartbeat. Yet, Win’s eyes remained crystal clear, dry, and cold.

Not a single tear fell from her lashes.

"Win... Cry... Please, just cry..." Josie choked out, her trembling hand stroking Win’s hair. "Don't be like this... Don't stay silent like this..."

"I can't cry, Josie," Win said, her tone unnervingly level. "My mother didn't cry either when she got her breast cancer diagnosis. She spent a whole year crying and begging fate, only to end up vomiting blood in a hospital bed anyway. Tears won't make cancer cells disappear. They just make me look like a pathetic loser."

She gently pushed Josie back, using her thumbs to wipe away the smudged tear tracks on her friend’s cheeks. The smile on Win’s lips was razor-thin and ruthless.

"Keaton moved out. He even took the Breville coffee maker."

Josie stared at her in utter bewilderment, her voice broken by hiccups. "What... what?"

"He said he couldn't invest in something when he already knew how it ends." Win stood up slowly, brushing off the creases on her black trousers. "He’s very realistic. And I think he’s right. It’s time I started getting realistic about my own life, too."

Win walked toward the desk tucked in the corner of the room.

On the oak surface, amidst neat stacks of insurance files, sat a premium navy-blue leather journal. It was a notebook she had purchased just last week at a boutique, originally intended to meticulously record every expense for her future married life—from utilities and mortgage payments on their new house to savings for their first child.

Win opened the journal. The crisp white pages, smelling faintly of expensive printing ink, lay open before her.

At the top of the first page, the words she had written in elegant black ink still remained: Wedding Ledger & Future Planning.

Win looked at those words, her dark eyes devoid of a single ripple.

She picked up her gold-plated Montblanc fountain pen and uncapped it. The gold nib gleamed under the light.

Without a moment's hesitation, Win pressed down hard, dragging a thick, heavy black line across the page, mercilessly striking through the words Wedding Ledger & Future Planning. The dark ink tore through the thin paper, wiping away every illusion of a happy future.

Right beneath that thick, ink-soaked scar, Win carefully penned new words. The black ink was bold, sharp, proud, and chilling to the core:

The Last Ledger.

She flipped to the next page and set her pen to the very first line.

Objectives:

1. Do not spend a single cent on chemo.

2. Reclaim every dollar of savings.

3. Live out the remaining days in the most ruthless way possible.

Win snapped the journal shut with a crisp thud. She raised her head, looking out the large glass window to where the city of Cleveland lay submerged in the icy night, the distant streetlights casting a sharp, cold glint across her face like a blade.

Fate’s countdown clock had struck its opening ticks. And Winifred Callaghan was ready to recalculate every single debt life owed her.

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