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The Last Ember of Talon Ridge

Chapter 20

The Traitor

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Murky mist curled through Limestone Gap, swallowing the heavy, plodding footsteps of the returning party.

The entire valley of Talon Ridge fell into a ghastly silence, broken only by the howl of the wind rushing through dry cedar boughs.

Elena stepped inside her field tipi, her hands—hidden within her snow-fox fur coat—still trembling uncontrollably.

Thomas Whitfield’s words continued to drill into her eardrums like a freezing bit.

Boston… Massachusetts General… Dr. Elena Marsh.

He hadn't guessed. He had pronounced every syllable with absolute precision in a tone of polite, ruthless sophistication.

A white woman transported through time to a wild valley in 1876, who had never disclosed her true name to a single blue-coated soldier… How could Whitfield possibly know that name?

Only one horrifying possibility tore through her mind.

There was a traitor inside Talon Ridge.

Someone who had watched her, overheard her conversations with Daniel Reeve or the words she uttered in her feverish delirium, and passed the information out beyond the canyon.

Elena did not go to Grey Elk.

He was presiding over an emergency council with White Feather and Black Arrow to prepare for the upcoming life-or-death battle.

She turned on her heel and strode toward the western ledge—where Running Deer was resharpening his war axe beside the dying embers of a fire.

The sound of stone scraping against steel—rasp… rasp…—sounded agonizing enough to tear her nerves apart.

Elena stopped before the fierce warrior.

For the first time, she looked directly at the long scar across his cheek, speaking in a firm, crisp tone without a second of hesitation:

"I need to talk to you. Right now."

Running Deer paused his sharpening. He raised his head, his dark, bloodshot eyes looking up at her with his usual suspicion. Yet recognizing the unusual, icy edge in Elena's ash-gray eyes, he bolted to his feet.

"Speak," he uttered a single word in English.

"Whitfield knows my name. My full name, and where I used to work in the white world," Elena lowered her voice, each word dropping like cracking ice. "Inside this camp… someone is feeding him information."

Running Deer froze.

The scar on his cheek twitched with rage. His grip on the axe handle tightened until his knuckles turned stark white, a sudden, murderous fury flaring in his eyes:

"What?! Who dares sell out A-pó?!"

"Control your temper!" Elena slammed her hand onto the stone ledge, reining in his impulsiveness. "If you cause a scene, they will erase every trace. You know every person here, and I know how to spot the smallest details. We must find him ourselves before he sends the next message."

Running Deer stared at her for a long time.

For the first time since her arrival, the fierce warrior no longer viewed her as a suspicious outsider. He gave a firm nod, choosing to cast aside all prejudice to stand in the same rank as his brother's Wakan Winyan.

The quiet investigation began amidst the suffocating atmosphere of the valley.

Elena applied the meticulous observational instincts of a surgeon.

She scrutinized the postures, hand calluses, and harsh frost marks on the hemlines of deerskin tunics belonging to every villager. She analyzed the murky mud clinging to the soles of leather moccasins—a red mud found only along the southern riverbed near the blue-coats' negotiation post.

Meanwhile, Running Deer relied on the instincts of a wild hunter.

He combed through the list of those absent from their tipis during the recent snowstorms, particularly the night the epidemic erupted and the night preceding the negotiation.

By late afternoon, every fragmented clue converged onto a single point.

Broken Stone.

A long-standing member of the Tribal Council—an elderly Lakota man with silvering hair and a stooped back.

He carried a strange callus on his right index finger—the mark of holding a white man's ink pen, something a pure Lakota warrior would never possess.

And most critically: his four-year-old granddaughter, who had suffered a high fever during the epidemic, had been saved by a strange jar of white medicinal powder he had secretly brought back to his tipi three days prior.

"It's him..." Running Deer ground his teeth, his hand clamping around the hilt of his hunting knife.

"Wait," Elena pulled his arm back. "We must catch him in the act of delivering the message. Otherwise, the council will claim we are slandering a respected elder."

A blood-red sunset stretched across the frozen Powder River.

Cold wind howled over the limestone cliffs.

Elena and Running Deer crouched behind a snow-covered rock ledge, their eyes fixed on a dark silhouette slowly crawling across the icy band along the riverbank.

Broken Stone.

He wore a tattered buffalo hide coat, his arms cradling a small clay jar wrapped in leather cloth.

From the opposite bank, a white rider clad in a gray cloak emerged from the dry pine woods, slowly spurring his horse closer.

It was Whitfield’s messenger.

"Move!" Running Deer roared like a wild beast.

He lunged from behind the ledge like an arrow tearing through the wind, his war axe swinging through the air.

The white rider panicked, reaching for his revolver, but before he could squeeze the trigger, Running Deer’s axe bit deep into his shoulder, hurling him violently onto the blood-soaked snow.

Broken Stone froze in his tracks.

The clay jar slipped from his hands, shattering against the ice.

From within fell a small roll of paper containing meticulous notes on the layout of the medical tipis, the remaining ammunition reserves, and the name Elena Marsh.

He did not run. He raised no knife to resist.

The elderly Lakota man slowly sank to his knees on the freezing snow, his hands limp at his sides, his heavily lined face buried in total collapse.

Broken Stone knelt there amidst the freezing snow.

The wind off the Powder River whipped violently at his silver-streaked hair, blowing away the torn fragments of paper scattered across the broken ice.

Running Deer hauled Broken Stone up by his collar, dragging the elder toward the center of Talon Ridge like a corpse.

Elena followed behind, her footsteps heavy in the powdery snow.

That night, the chief's large tipi hung dense with deep red firelight and an icy silence.

The entire Tribal Council assembled.

Wavering firelight illuminated the weather-worn faces, lined with intense fury, shock, and bitter disappointment.

Broken Stone knelt in the center of the lodge, his hands bound tightly with bison tendon.

The shattered clay jar and the leather scroll of notes rested prominently before Grey Elk.

"Broken Stone..."

White Feather took a step forward, the string of blue clay beads around his neck terrifyingly still. His voice fell low, dropping like a stone plunging into a deep well:

"...You have lived with this tribe for forty winters. Why?"

Broken Stone raised his head.

His cloudy eyes brimming with tears, his voice raspy and trembling as it shattered the heavy silence:

"My granddaughter... A child of only four winters!"

He pressed his forehead against the earth, choked sobs breaking from his aging chest:

"Her fever raged for three days and nights without breaking... The blue-coated soldiers promised a jar of white medicine powder and a sack of flour for the winter... They said I needed only to record the number of warriors and the name of the Wakan Winyan... They promised they would not kill the child..."

A wave of furious muttering erupted like a spark caught in dry grass.

Running Deer strode forward, drawing his hunting knife, his eyes bloodshot as he roared:

"He traded the lives of the entire village for a jar of medicine! By Talon Ridge law, a traitor must be flayed and hung from a cedar tree!"

"Hold your hand!"

Black Arrow and two warriors rushed forward, pinning Running Deer back.

Tribe law was brutal and uncompromising: selling out one's people to the Wasichu carried a single penalty—death in disgrace, erased from the bloodline forever.

Grey Elk sat at the highest position.

The chief's imposing frame cast a long shadow over the traitor.

His amber eyes were deep and unreadable, suppressing a surge of agonizing pain and fierce rage. There was a time when Broken Stone had fought beside his father, a man who had carried him through the brutal snowstorms of the Bighorns.

Grey Elk turned his face toward Elena.

Elena stood beside Sarah, looking at him in silence.

She offered no plea for mercy, nor did she demand punishment.

Her ash-gray eyes held a quiet understanding for the brutal decision the chief was about to shoulder on his broad frame.

Grey Elk closed his eyes for a single breath, then opened them slowly.

Rising to his feet, his voice rang sharp and clear in his native tongue, each word falling cold as a war axe slicing through the winter night:

"Broken Stone has betrayed the blood of the Talon Ridge."

The entire lodge held its breath.

"By the law of our ancestors... a traitor must die. Yet he once rode as a warrior beside my father."

Grey Elk looked straight into Broken Stone’s eyes, delivering the sentence in a voice filled with absolute authority:

"I grant you leave to walk out into the northern canyon alone before sunrise. Take a single knife and a canteen of water. No one shall follow. Your blood... is surrendered to the Great Spirit and the cold of the Bighorns."

A harsh sentence, yet the least shameful way to preserve a final thread of dignity for his young granddaughter and his family.

Broken Stone bowed his head to the snow, tears streaming down onto the damp earth:

"Thank you... A-pó..."

At daybreak.

Snow began falling heavy once more, blanketing the path leading out to the northern canyon in pure white.

Talon Ridge sank into a suffocating, heavy gloom.

Broken Stone's crime had been punished and the messenger eliminated, yet the wound left behind by betrayal was one no medicine could heal.

Suspicion spread like a venomous virus, quietly gnawing at every tipi.

Villagers looked at one another with guarded, shifting glances.

The Cheyenne looked at the Lakota with mistrust. Warriors observed the newly arrived refugees with icy vigilance. The trust that had bound them together through the epidemic now bore deep, jagged fractures.

Elena walked through the camp amidst the cutting cold.

A five-year-old Cheyenne child—the very child she had devotedly saved in the quarantine tipi—stood by a dying fire, clutching a deerskin doll.

Elena paused, intending to offer a warm smile to the child.

Yet as the child looked at her, catching sight of her ash-blonde hair and her white woman's ash-gray eyes...

The little girl clutched her doll tight, a vague terror dawning in her eyes, before turning her face away and dashing inside her tipi.

Elena stood rooted in the snowy mist.

Tears gathered unbidden on her ash-gray lashes, freezing into tiny beads of ice.

The battle against Thomas Whitfield had not yet fired its first official round, but the paranoia and cruelty of war had already begun to carve away and tear Talon Ridge apart from the inside out.

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